那    个    星    期    天   

 我    还    记    得    我    的    第    一    次    盼    望   。 那    是    一    个    星    期    天   , 从    早    晨    到    下    午   ,  一    直    到    天    色    昏    暗    下    去   
 那    个    星    期    天    母    亲    答    应    带    我    出    去   , 去    哪    儿    已    经    记    不    清    了   , 可    能    是    动    物    园   , 也    可    能    是    别    的    什    么    地    方   。 总    之    她    很    久    之    前    就    答    应    了   , 就    在    那    个    星    期    天    带    我    出    去    玩   , 这    不    会    错   。 一    个    人    平    生    第    一    次    盼    一    个    日    子   , 都    不    会    错   。 而    且    就    在    那    天    早    晨   , 母    亲    也    还    是    这    样    答    应    的   : 去   , 当    然    去   。 我    想    到    底    是    让    我    盼    来    了   
 起    床   , 刷    牙   , 吃    饭   , 那    是    个    春    天    的    早    晨   , 阳    光    明    媚   。 走    吗   ? 等    一    会    儿   , 等    一    会    儿    再    走   。 我    跑    出    去   , 站    在    街    门    口   , 等    一    会    儿    就    等    一    会    儿   。 我    藏    在    大    门    后   , 藏    了    很    久   。 我    知    道    不    会    是    那    么    简    单    的    一    会    儿   , 我    得    不    出    声    地    多    藏    一    会    儿   。 母    亲    出    来    了   , 可    我    忘    了    吓    唬    她   , 她    手    里    怎    么    提    着    菜    篮   ? 您    说    了    去   ! 等    等   , 买    完    菜   , 买    完    菜    就    去   。 买    完    菜    马    上    就    去    吗   ? 唿   
 这    段    时    光    不    好    挨   。 我    踏    着    一    块    块    方    砖    跳   , 跳    房    子   , 等    母    亲    回    来   。 我    看    着    天    看    着    云    彩    走   , 等    母    亲    回    来   , 焦    急    又    兴    奋   。 我    蹲    在    院    子    的    地    上   , 用    树    枝    拨    弄    着    一    个    蚁    穴   , 爬    着    去    找    更    多    的    蚁    穴   。 院    子    里    就    我    一    个    孩    子   , 没    人    跟    我    玩   。 我    坐    在    草    丛    里    翻    看    一    本    画    报   , 那    是    一    本    看    了    多    少    回    的    电    影    画    报   。 那    上    面    有    一    群    比    我    大    的    女    孩    子   , 一    个    个    都    非    常    漂    亮   。 我    坐    在    草    丛    里    看    她    们   , 想    象    她    们    的    家   , 想    象    她    们    此    刻    在   
 本    文    选    自   《 务    虚    笔    记   》, 作    者    史    铁    生   , 选    作    课    文    时    有    改    动   
 干    什    么   , 想    象    她    们    的    兄    弟    姐    妹    和    她    们    的    父    母   , 想    象    她    们    的    声    音   。 去    年    的    荒    草    丛    里    又    有    了    绿    色   , 院    子    很    大   , 空    空    落    落   
 母    亲    买    菜    回    来    却    又    翻    箱    倒    柜    忙    开    了   。 走    吧   , 您    不    是    说    买    菜    回    来    就    走    吗   ? 好    啦    好    啦   , 没    看    我    正    忙    呢    吗   ? 真    奇    怪   , 该    是    我    有    理    的    事    啊   ? 不    是    吗   , 我    不    是    一    直    在    等    着   , 母    亲    不    是    答    应    过    了    吗   ? 整    个    上    午    我    就    跟    在    母    亲    腿    底    下   : 去    吗   ? 去    吧   , 走    吧   , 怎    么    还    不    走    啊   ? 走    吧   …… 我    就    这    样    念    念    叨    叨    地    追    在    母    亲    的    腿    底    下   , 看    她    做    完    一    件    事    又    去    做    一    件    事   。 我    还    没    有    她    的    腿    高   , 那    两    条    不    停    顿    的    腿    至    今    都    在    我    眼    前    晃    动   , 它    们    不    停    下    来   , 它    们    好    几    次    绊    在    我    身    上   , 我    好    几    次    差    点    儿    绞    在    它    们    中    间    把    它    们    碰    倒   
 下    午    吧   , 母    亲    说   , 下    午   , 睡    醒    午    觉    再    去   。 去   , 母    亲    说   , 下    午   ,
 准    去   。 但    这    次    怨    我   , 怨    我    自    己   , 我    把    午    觉    睡    过    了    头   。 醒    来    时    我    看    见    母    亲    在    洗    衣    服   。 要    是    那    时    就    走    还    不    晚   。 我    看    看    天   , 还    不    晚   。 还    去    吗   ? 去   。 走    吧   ? 洗    完    衣    服   。 这    一    次    不    能    原    谅   。 我    不    知    道    那    堆    衣    服    要    洗    多    久   , 可    母    亲    应    该    知    道   。 我    蹲    在    她    身    边   , 看    着    她    洗   。 我    一    声    不    吭   , 盼    着   。 我    想    我    再    不    离    开    半    步   , 再    不    把    觉    睡    过    头   。 我    想    衣    服    一    洗    完    我    马    上    拉    起    她    就    走   , 决    不    许    她    再    耽    搁   。 我    看    着    盆    里    的    衣    服    和    盆    外    的    衣    服   , 我    看    着    太    阳   , 看    着    光    线   , 我    一    声    不    吭   。 看    着    盆    里    揉    动    的    衣    服    和    绽    开    的    泡    沫   , 我    感    觉    到    周    围    的    光    线    渐    渐    暗    下    去   , 渐    渐    地    凉    下    去    沉    郁    下    去   , 越    来    越    远    越    来    越    缥    缈   , 我    一    声    不    吭   , 忽    然    有    点    儿    明    白    了   
 我    现    在    还    能    感    觉    到    那    光    线    漫    长    而    急    遽    的    变    化   , 孤    独    而    惆    怅    的    黄     昏    的    到    来   , 并    且    听    得    见    母    亲    咔    嚓    咔    嚓    搓    衣    服    的    声    音   , 那    声    音    永    无    休   
 止    就    像    时    光    的    脚    步   。 那    个    星    期    天   。 就    在    那    天   。 母    亲    发    现    男    孩    儿    蹲    在    那    儿    一    动    不    动   , 发    现    他    在    哭   , 在    不    出    声    地    流    泪   。 我    感    到    母    亲    惊    惶    地    甩    了    甩    手    上    的    水   , 把    我    拉    过    去    拉    进    她    的    怀    里   。 我    听    见    母    亲    在    说   , 一    边    亲    吻    着    我    一    边    不    停    地    说   : 噢   , 对    不    起   , 噢   , 对    不    起   …… 那    个    星    期    天   , 本    该    是    出    去    的   , 去    哪    儿    记    不    得    了   。 男    孩    儿    蹲    在    那    个    又    大    又    重    的    洗    衣    盆    旁   , 依    偎    在    母    亲    怀    里   , 闭    上    眼    睛    不    再    看    太    阳   , 光    线    正    无    可    挽    回    地    消    逝   , 一    派    荒    凉   
 情    以    物    迁   , 辞    以    情    发   。 写    文    章    就    像    说    话    一    样   , 要    抒    发    自    己    的    真    实    情    感   
 有    时   , 我    们    把    情    感    融    入    具    体    的    人   、 事    或    景    物    之    中   , 在    叙    述    中    自    然    而    然    地    流    露    情    感   。 如   ,《 那    个    星    期    天   》 有    一    段    叙    述    了    我    怎    样    挨    时    光   : 我    踏    着    一    块    块    方    砖    跳   , 跳    房    子   , 等    母    亲    回    来   。 我    看    着    天    看    着    云    彩    走   , 等    母    亲    回    来   …… 借    助    写    跳    房    子    看    着    云    彩    走    这    些    举    动   , 真    实    自    然    地    表    达    了    我    等    待    时    焦    急    又    兴    奋    的    情    感   
 有    时   , 我    们    也    可    以    把    心    里    想    说    的    话    直    接    写    出    来   , 抒    发    自    己    的    情    感   。 如   《 匆    匆   》 第    自    然    段   , 作    者    用    一    连    串    的    问    句   , 表    达    了    对    时    间    飞    逝    的    惋    惜    和    感    叹   , 很    能    打    动    读    者   , 容    易    使    读    者    产    生    相    同    的    感    受   
 我    们    都    生    活    在    一    定    的    环    境    中   , 当    心    情    不    同    时   , 对    身    边    事    物    的    感    受    也    会    有    所    不    同   。 如   :
 一    直    想    养    一    只    小    狗   ,  妈    妈    今    天    终    于    答    应    了   
 路    旁    的    一    朵    朵    花    儿    好     像    在    对    我    微    笑   , 树    上    的    鸟     儿    也    在    欢    唱   , 树    叶    沙    沙    作     响   , 好    像    也    在    为    我    高    兴   。  打    篮    球    的    时    候   ,  我    有    几    个    好    机    会     没    把    握    住   ,  结    果    我    们    输    给    了    二    班   
 路    旁    的    花    儿    耷    拉    着    脑    袋   , 一    副    无     精    打    采    的    样    子   。 树    上    的    小    鸟    叽    叽    喳    喳     地    叫    着   , 也    像    是    在    讥    笑    我   
 从    下    面    的    情    境    中    选    择    一    两    个   , 就    心    情    好    与    不    好    这    两    种    状    态   , 分    别    写    几    句    话   
 走    在    小    巷    里     奔    跑    在    田    野    上     弹    琴     钓    鱼    ……

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