小    站   

 这    是    一    个    铁    路    线    上    的    小    站   , 只    有    慢    车    才    停    靠    两    三    分    钟   。  快    车    转    瞬    间    疾    驰    而    过   , 旅    客    们    甚    至    连    站    名    还    来    不    及    看    清    楚   
 就    在    这    转    瞬    间   , 你    也    许    看    到    一    间    红    瓦    灰    墙    的    小    屋   , 月    台    上    几    根    漆    成    淡    蓝    色    的    木    栅    栏   , 或    者    还    有    三    五    个    人    影   。 而    这    一    切    又    立    即    消    失    了   , 火    车    两    旁    依    然    是    逼    人    而    来    的    山    崖    和    巨    石   
 这    是    一    个    在    北    方    山    区    常    见    的    小    站   。 月    台    左    面    有    一    张    红    榜   , 上    面    用    大    字    标    明    了    二    百    四    十    一    天    安    全    无    事    故    的    记    录   , 贴    着    竞    赛    优    胜    者    的    照    片   。 红    榜    旁    边    是    一    块    小    黑    板   , 上    面    用    白    粉    笔    写    着    当    天    的    天    气    预    报    和    早    晨    的    报    纸    摘    要   。 出    站    口    的    旁    边    贴    着    一    张    讲    卫    生    的    宣    传    画   。 月    台    上   , 有    两    三    个    挑    着    箩    筐    的    农    民   , 正    准    备    上    车    进    城   。 几    步    以    外   , 站    上    的    两    位    工    作    人    员    正    在    商    量    着    什    么   
 月    台    中    间    有    一    个    小    小    的    喷    水    池   ,  显    然    是    经    过    精    心    设    计   
 小    站    的    小   ,  可    以    从    哪    些    语    句    中     看    出    来   ?
 本    文    作    者    袁    鹰   ,  选    作    课    文    时    有    改    动   
 的   。 喷    水    池    中    间    堆    起    一    座    小    小    的    假    山   , 假    山    上    栽    着    一    棵    尺     把    高    的    小    树   。 喷    泉    从    小    树    下    面    的    石    孔    喷    出    来   , 水    珠    四    射   ,  把    假    山    上    的    小    宝    塔    洗    得    一    尘    不    染   
 月    台    的    两    头    种    了    几    株    杏    树   , 花    开    得    正    艳   , 引    来    一    群    蜜    蜂   。 蜜    蜂    嗡    嗡    地    边    歌    边    舞   , 点    缀    着    这    个    宁    静    的    小    站   
 小    站    上    没    有    钟   , 也    没    有    电    铃   。 站    长    吹    一    长    声    哨    子   , 刚     到    站    的    火    车    跟    着    长    啸    一    声   , 缓    缓    地    离    开    小    站   , 继    续    自    己    的     征    途   
 这    个    小    站    坐    落    在    山    坳    里   。 站    在    月    台    上    向    四    周    望    去   ,  只    看    到    光    秃    秃    的    石    头    山   , 没    有    什    么    秀    丽    的    景    色   。 可    是    就     在    这    儿   , 就    在    这    个    小    站    上   , 却    出    现    了    一    股    活    泼    的    喷    泉   ,  几    树    灿    烂    的    杏    花   
 这    喷    泉   ,  这    杏    花   ,  给    旅    客    们    带    来    了    温    暖    的    春    意   
 最    后    两    段     没    有    再    写    小    站    的     小   , 这    在    表    达     上    有    什    么    作    用   ?
 想    清    楚    自    己    要    表    达    的    中    心    意    思   。 注    意    围    绕    中    心    意    思   , 从    不    同    的    方    面    或    选    择     不    同    的    事    例    来    写   
 写    之    前   , 可    以    拟    个    提    纲   , 看    看    选    择    的    材    料    是    不    是    能    够    表    达    中    心    意    思   。 写    完    后   , 请    同    学    读    读   , 看    看    他    能    不    能    体    会    到    你    写    的    中    心    意    思   
 可    以    用    你    选    的    字    作    为    题    目   , 也    可    以    另    外    拟    一    个    题    目   
 我    们    是    大    地    的    一    部    分   ,  大    地    也    是    我    们    的    一    部    分   

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