我    的    战    友    邱    少    云   

 我    们    读    过    英    雄    黄    继    光    的    故    事   , 这    篇    课    文    的    主    人    公    同    样    是    一    位    抗     美    援    朝    英    雄   。 默    读    课    文   , 找    出    描    写    我    心    理    活    动    的    句    子   , 体    会    邱     少    云    是    怎    样    一    位    伟    大    的    战    士   。 课    文    写    了    邱    少    云    和    战    友    们    潜    伏    的     山    沟    环    境   ,  又    写    了    邱    少    云    任    凭    烈    火    烧    身    纹    丝    不    动   ,  结    合    相    关    内    容    说     说    两    者    有    什    么    联    系   
 天    亮    以    前   , 我    们    在    高    地    的    山    坳    里   , 找    了    一    条    比    较    隐    蔽    的    山    沟     潜    伏    起    来   
 太    阳    渐    渐    爬    上    山    头   ,  晒    干    了    我    们    身    上    的    寒    霜   ,  早    上    冻    麻    了    的    腿     也    开    始    暖    和    起    来   。 我    们    本    来    打    算    趁    这    时    候    在    温    暖    的    阳    光    下    睡    一    会    儿   ,  因    为    已    经    熬    了    整    整    一    夜   , 而    且    当    天    晚    上    还    有    激    烈    的    战    斗    在    等    着   , 需     要    养    养    精    神   , 好    完    成    晚    上    的    战    斗    任    务   , 可    是    我    怎    么    也    合    不    上    眼    睛   。  谁    能    趴    在    敌    人    的    鼻    子    底    下    睡    大    觉    呢   ?
 我    发    现    这    条    干    涸    的    小    山    沟    并    不    十    分    隐    蔽   。 我    们    离    敌    人    太    近    了   ,  前    面    几    十    米    就    是    敌    人    的    前    沿    阵    地   。 我    们    不    但    可    以    看    见    敌    人    设    置    的    铁     丝    网    和    胸    墙   , 而    且    可    以    看    见    敌    人    主    阵    地    上    的    地    堡    和    火    力    点   , 甚    至    连     敌    人    的    谈    话    声    都    听    得    见   。 可    以    想    见   , 敌    人    居    高    临    下   , 发    现    我    们    当    然     更    容    易   。 我    们    必    须    僵    卧    着    一    动    不    动   , 一    声    低    低    的    咳    嗽    或    者    轻    轻    地    蜷     一    下    腿   , 都    可    能    被    敌    人    发    觉   
 我    们    全    靠    身    上    的    伪    装    掩    护    自    己   。 我    看    了    一    下    前    面   ,  班    长    和    几    个     战    士    都    伏    在    枯    黄    的    茅    草    里   , 身    上    也    披    着    厚    厚    的    茅    草    作    为    伪    装   , 猛    一     看    去   , 很    难    发    现    他    们   。 我    又    看    了    看    伏    在    不    远    处    的    邱    少    云   , 他    也    全    身   
 本    文    作    者    李    元    兴   ,  选    作    课    文    时    有    改    动   
 伪    装   , 隐    蔽    得    更    好   , 相    隔    这    么    近   , 我    都    几    乎    找    不    到    他   
 我    们    的    炮    兵    不    断    地    向    敌    人    阵    地    上    轰    击   , 山    顶    上    不    时    地    腾    起    一    团    一    团    的    青    烟   , 敌    人    阵    地    前    沿    的    地    堡    一    个    接    一    个    地    被    掀    翻    了   。 炮    兵    的    轰    击    不    但    摧    毁    了    敌    人    的    一    部    分    工    事   , 便    于    我    们    晚    上    突    击   , 而    且    把    敌    人    打    得    躲    进    隐    蔽    洞    里   , 又    保    证    了    我    们    潜    伏    部    队    的    安    全   
 看    到    山    顶    上    敌    人    被    我    军    炮    火    轰    击    的    情    景   , 我    只    盼    望    快    点    儿    天    黑   ,  好    痛    痛    快    快    地    打    一    仗   。 看    看    太    阳   , 却    老    是    停    在    原    来    的    地    方   , 就    像    钉     住    了    似    的   
 约    莫    点    钟    的    时    候   , 突    然    一    发    烟    幕    弹    飞    来   , 在    我    们    附    近    爆    炸    了   , 一    排    一    排    的    炮    弹    跟    着    打    过    来   。 显    然   , 狡    猾    的    敌    人    对    他    们    阵    地    前    沿    的    安    全    极    不    放    心   , 又    没    有    胆    量    冒    着    我    军    的    炮    火    到    这    一    带    来    搜    索   , 只    好    把    看    家    本    领    火    力    警    戒    拿    出    来    了   
 我    们    附    近    的    荒    草    着    火    了   , 火    苗    子    呼    呼    地    蔓    延    着   , 烧    得    枯    黄    的    茅    草    毕    毕    剥    剥    地    响   。 恶    毒    的    敌    人    竟    使    用    燃    烧    弹    来    进    行    搜    索    了   
 不    一    会    儿   , 火    已    经    烧    到    我    面    前   , 火    苗    子    一    伸    一    伸    的   , 烤    得    我    脸    上    热    辣    辣    地    疼   。 幸    而    面    前    有    一    堆    不    长    草    的    乱    石    头    挡    着   , 火    才    没    烧    到    我    身    上   
 忽    然   , 一    阵    浓    重    的    棉    布    焦    味    钻    进    我    的    鼻    子   , 我    扭    头    一    看   , 哎    呀   !  火    烧    到    了    邱    少    云    身    上   ! 他    的    棉    衣    已    经    烧    着    了   , 浑    身    火    苗    乱    窜   , 看    样    子     是    溅    上    了    燃    烧    弹    的    油    液   。 趁    着    风    势   , 一    团    烈    火    把    他    整    个    包    围    了   
 这    个    时    候   , 邱    少    云    如    果    迅    速    从    火    堆    里    跳    出    来   , 就    地    打    几    个    滚   , 身    上    的    火    是    可    以    扑    灭    的   。 我    们    卧    在    他    附    近    的    任    何    一    个    人   , 如    果    跳    过    去    把    他    拉    出    来   , 扯    掉    他    着    火    的    棉    衣   , 也    能    救    出    自    己    的    战    友   。 但    是    这    样    一    来   , 我    们    就    会    被    山    头    上    敌    人    的    哨    兵    发    觉   , 那    么    不    仅    是    我    们    这    一   
 个    班    要    牺    牲    在    这    里   , 也     不    仅    是    埋    伏    在    我    们    身    后     的    整    个    潜    伏    部    队    要    受    到     重    大    损    失   , 更    严    重    的    是     我    们    准    备    了    好    久    的    这    次     作    战    计    划    要    完    全    落    空   
 我    的    心    紧    缩    着   , 我    担    心    这    个    年    轻    的    战    士    会    实    在    忍    耐    不    住    突    然    跳    起    来   , 或    者    突    然    叫    出    声    来   。 我    几    次    回    过    头    来   , 不    敢    朝    他    那    儿    看   , 不    忍    看    着    我    的    战    友    被    活    活    烧    死   , 但    是    我    又    忍    不    住    不    看   。 我    心    里    像    刀    绞    一    般   , 眼    泪    模    糊    了    我    的    眼    睛   
 图    孙    国    岐   
 烈    火    在    我    的    战    友    邱    少    云    身    上    烧    了    半    个    多    钟    头    才    渐    渐    熄    灭   。 这    个     伟    大    的    战    士   , 像    千    斤    巨    石   , 伏    在    那    儿    纹    丝    不    动   , 直    到    牺    牲    前    的    最    后     一    息   , 都    没    发    出    哪    怕    是    极    轻    微    的    一    声    呻    吟   
 黄    昏    时   , 我    们    勇    猛    地    冲    上    了    敌    人    的    阵    地   。 在    高    地    上    沸    腾    着    激    动    人    心    的    口    号   : 为    邱    少    云    同    志    报    仇   !
 我    当    时    的    感    觉   , 仿    佛    邱    少    云    同    志    并    没    有    牺    牲   , 他    和    我    们    一    起    向    敌    人    冲    锋   !
 我    永    远    忘    不    了    那    一    天   —— 年    月    日   
 你    作    过    演    讲    吗   ?
 让    我    们    在    班    上    开    展    一    次    演    讲    活    动   。 可    以    从    下    面    选    择    一    个    话    题    范    围   , 也    可    以     自    定   
 根    据    演    讲    的    内    容   , 拟    定    一    个    题    目   , 如    读    书    的    快    乐    拒    食    野    味   , 从    我    做    起    远    离    垃    圾    食    品   , 关    注    身    体    健    康   
 作    好    演    讲   , 首    先    要    写    好    演    讲    稿   。 什    么    样    的    演    讲    稿    才    有    说    服    力    呢   ?
 演    讲    稿    写    好    后   , 可    以    自    己    先    练    习    一    下   , 试    试    怎    样    演    讲    更    好   。 演    讲    后   , 听    听    大    家    的    建    议   , 提    高    自    己    的    演    讲    水    平   
 祖    国    在    我    心    中    朗    诵    会   、 学    校    运    动    会   、 六    一    儿    童    节    演    出   , 植    树   、 端    午    节    看    赛    龙    舟   、 看    望    孤    寡    老    人   …… 这    些    校    内    外    活    动   , 你    参    加    过    哪    些   ?
 选    一    次    活    动    写    下    来   , 和    同    学    分    享    你    的    经    历   
 本    单    元    有    的    课    文    写    到    了    大    的    场    面   , 如    狼    牙    山    上    的    激    烈    战    斗   、 开    国    大    典    中    的    阅    兵    式   。 课    文    在    写    这    些    场    面    时   , 运    用    了    点    面    结    合    的    方    法   。 如   ,《 开    国    大    典   》 写    阅    兵    式    时   , 既    从    整    体    上    写    了    受    阅    部    队    经    过    天    安    门    广    场    时    那    种    整    齐    威    武    的    情    景   , 又    注    意    通    过    细    节    展    现    各    个    方    阵    的    风    采   。 这    不    仅    让    我    们    感    受    到    了    整    个    阅    兵    式    的    庄    严   、 隆    重   , 还    让    我    们    领    略    到    了    各    个    队    伍    的    特    色   
 这    两    个    句    子    分    别    用    赞    叹    婉    言    谢    绝    代    替    了    说   。 我    还    想    到    了    谈    论   、 讲    解   、 窃    窃    私    语   ……
 也    可    以    不    用    与    说     有    关    的    词    语   
 我    最    亲    爱    的    孩    子    啊   ! 母    亲    不    用    十    言     万    语    来    教    育    你   , 就    用    实    行    来    教    育    你   。 在     你    长    大    成    人    之    后   , 希    望    不    要    忘    记    你    的    母     亲    是    为    国    而    牺    牲    的   !  掏    自   《 赵   - 曼    写    给    儿    子    的    信   》 书   
 读    书    好    比    串    门    儿   —— 隐    身    的    串    门    儿   。—— 杨    绛   

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